Is this a good beginning to my story...I know needs serious editing...?

It's really, really confusing. I read it twice, and every time I finished it just left me thinking "wait, what just happened?". Maybe it's because I haven't read the beginning or the ending, but this section is pretty confusing. Other than that, it's pretty good :D You do have some grammar mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed with some editing. I want to know what happens next!! :D :D :D Good luck with it!